Class 1-4 Seoul Visual Media High School :Who is my role model (a hero in my life)?

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My Role Model - Mr. Gang won il
my middle school teacher

Da-min Shin

Have you ever met your best teacher? I have met my best teacher in my middle school third grade and his my hero, too. I respect him because he always took care of his class students. When I was middle school students, I always calm and resolved myself so many teachers did not attention to me. but he is different. He attention all of his class students. Even if me. When my friend had a bad happening, he helped her as if it was his matter. My friend and I was impressed him solved that happening. at that time, He was so kind. He always think about "How can I get closer to my students." so, he told his stories funny, helps to life to us. And he always help to get good memories in middle school third grade. so we took camping in school, eat bacon, watch movie and go hiking. Because of him, we have a good memories to him and school.

He looks to other people. He never says negative words to other people. and When he reproached someone in rude words, he would apologize first before the other do. He always say "I'm sorry." even if his students. That is impressed to me. No one teacher doesn't say sorry to students before I met him. That is change my mind to teacher. and he didn't like someone worries him. When he was so sick, he didn't say crybaby words.

Now he passed away in september 28th, 2010. My class students will don't forget memories with him, and we congratulate his the last student.

 

 

My role model - my mother
                      Yongseon Baek

    Have you ever thought about your role model? I think my role model is 'my mother'. First, every day, she is very busy. in the past, I couldn't see rest her. she is very hard, bus every day she sat" this is undemanding work" I listening that,
somehow, I'm very stupid. because I often delay a homework and to do study. So I
wish to delay things, I think my mother. and reflect on oneself about me. and whenever I see her, she is smile to me, always. Although it seems tired, she is smile, every day. that a very amazing. I don't see a rest her, very well. I saw she always working. that a very grow uneasy. I want to rest by she. whenever, I saw her to respcted.
   Second, i'm very sick a long time, my mother took care of to me, also, she had a cold. but she doesn't look like to sick. Although she had a cold, she does to work. every day and took care of me. whenever she concerned to me, I also worried to her. because she does to work without a stop. when I sick, she doesn't seem to be thinking of she's condition. when I think, mother's love is the greatest thing in the world. I want to be like her.
Now I'm respect my mother.
  I love you mom!

 

My Role Model - King SeJong the Great

Tae-woo In

Topic setence 1 : I want to learn spirit of King Se-jong.

a. His Family is two sons and one daugther
   - To talk about his family, He is very famous a great man in South Korea. Every Korean knows and respect him. Sejong the Great, who ruled between 1418 and 1450, is the 4th king of the Chosun dynasty. He is the son of King Taejong and Queen Won-Kyung, and the husband of the daughter of Shim-on, Seo-hun. King Sejongs given name is Doe, and his adult name is Won-Jung.

b. His Achievements
  -Sejong loved his people and dedicated his entire rule to working as one with them. Amongst many other accomplishments, Sejong gathered all the agricultural and medical knowledge scattered throughout the country and created a complete, unified system molded specifically for the Chosun Kingdom. However, his best known and arguably most important feat is the creation of Hangul, considered one of the most advanced written languages in today’s world. Historically speaking, the creation of Hangul is Korea's foremost cultural heritage and one of the great intellectual achievements by the human race.

c. Other Achievements
  - He recruited talented geniuses to develop the nation. For example Rain Gauge, Sundial, and Jagyeokru etc. Also He sent Jong-Mu Lee to explore and invade Tsushima Island. Then He expanded the empire to the north and installed 4 armies and 6 camps
d. Thinking of me
  - I think Sejong is the one of the best great people. Because he loved all his people and made Hangul. Hangul is very comfortable language in the world. but sad point is made the Korean language in secret so there aren't many records on the exact date.

Conclusion.
   - Every Korean respects him and pride. Let's learn Hangul's excellence and love the Hangul.